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I thought I'd never.... by ~defiantandstrong:icondefiantandstrong:



Broken pride upon the floor
From things I'd never do
Druken actions, stupid stunts
Shame I'm going through.....

I never lost control before
I always did what's right
But I finally slipped,
Fell on my ass,
I won't forget that night.....

I hide my face
I'm hurt inside
My world has fallen apart.....
The regret I feel
It cuts me deep
Like a blade up to my heart......

But I will move on
They will forget
Someone else will fall
Thinking that they knew who they were
To find out that they were wrong......
©2006-2009 ~defiantandstrong
:icondefiantandstrong:

Author's Comments

Kind of inspired by a close friend... I've been there myself... alcohol is a wonderfully wicked thing.....

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:iconbournlippy:
*sigh* cheers to that (with a non-alcoholic beverage). Love you bunches and I love this poem. FAVED.

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I’m too young for all this heartbreak
Too young for all the pain
Too young for every boy
Who ever took my love in vain
:icondefiantandstrong:
Haha I'm glad that you liked it and unfortunately I think that I still have some partying left in my blood. It takes quite a bit to knock me down, and I just got started.....

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Smile as my heart breaks
And bleeds on to my soul
Laugh to mask my dead eyes,
They stare from my drowned soul
:iconshadow-mines:
I like this.
A lot.

Probally because it's me.

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.must be for real, 'cause now i can feel.
.love me, like you love the sun.
.i felt you long after we were through.
.cause i'm just a teenage dirtbag, baby.
.i feel disgusted, and you should too.
.now maybe, i didn't mean to treat you bad, but i did i
:iconbournlippy:
No worries. It took me a while to fully be like I don't want to do this. But when it happens the way it happened to me it's a little sad.. Anyways good poem!!

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I’m too young for all this heartbreak
Too young for all the pain
Too young for every boy
Who ever took my love in vain
:icondefiantandstrong:
Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it so much. Yeah this is quite a few of us at one point or another.....

--
Smile as my heart breaks
And bleeds on to my soul
Laugh to mask my dead eyes,
They stare from my drowned soul

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